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Hey folks, some of you might remember a story I did awhile ago. While it was nice, I ended up not liking it because the story wasn't right for the character. So I decided to switch things up by first changing the main character into Jacob, not Johann. The second change was the alien species have been switched with techno-organic beings.

I hope you guys enjoy it regardless, and please leave a comment about things you like or wish to see improved. the comments will motivate me to write more. I am already working on the second chapter as of right now.
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"and then the screaming started" Funny line. This is interesting though I'm sure if all entry systems failed, there wdouln't be a person to save.